曹老师作文课精要总结

科技与日常生活（核心论段和结尾）

　　It’s well-known to us and all around us that technology is playing an increasing role in the improvement of our life. The first and foremost aspect that should be highlighted here is that ,As a matter of fact,tectnology makes our life more convenient.Nowaday,almost all of us are enjoying the modern transportation and telecommunication based on the tachnology..

　　Dr. Zhang,a famous antropologist at TsingHua university,pointted out “The standard of our living as well as the society has been promoted by the leap of technology”.what’s more,it is the modern medical system and remedy which are evolved from technology that ,in a broad sense,keep people physically stronger.According to a recent suvey by the average life span of humen- being has rised to 79.1(胡乱编造得), from 60 because of technology.One more point,though not conclusive yet,that can never be overlooked is that our life are been enriched considerablelly for the application of technology to the realm of recreation. As can be seen everywhere,people now find spiritual fufillment by playing computer games and by surfing on net.

　　All in all,20 century had wittnessed a series of technical explosion.From a long-term of view,so vital is technology to our life that we should lay much more emphasis on exploring it.

　　以上节选自MBA论坛，一培训学员的作文。我仔细看了下感觉有曹老师弟子的影子。顺便回忆下曹老师的作文课精要（系统一），与大家一起分享。要下班了，今天晚上继续完成这个贴。

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　　众所周知，科技在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用。首先也是最应当被强调的是：事实上，科技使我们的生活更加方便。人们现在正在享受着以科技为基础的交通和通讯手段。

　　清华大学的教授张兵教授是一位著名的人类学家，他曾指出“科技的飞跃推动人类生活水平和社会的进步”。其次，源于科技的现代医疗手段和医疗体系使人们更加健康。根据中国日报的调查，因为科技的原因，人们的平均寿命大大提高….。还有一点，虽然这一点还未有定论，但永远不应被忽略，即：因为科技应用于娱乐，使人们的生活变得更丰富多彩。正如到处可以看到的，人们通过网络和电脑游戏找到了精神上得满足。

　　总之，20世纪见证了一系列得科技大爆炸。从长远得角度来说，科技是如此得重要，以至于我们应该在未来更加重视发展它。
1)debate
a)sideA +sideB（就是分别说出Ａ和Ｂ的观点），比较陈旧的一种
b)topic+side Ｉ
第二种就是总结一下话题，然后说出自己的观点．例如有些大学生已经结婚，有些大学生正准备结婚，我认为．．．．．．
my view(support or oppose)
sth is of great value and meaning and import(是支持）如果表示反对就将great---little value---harm, meaning---disadvantage

2)graph
a)描述数据的变化
１）变化很大２）表现在那，涨跌情况,注意一头一尾３）数字表达能力（cite data)
表示增加的词汇（程度依次增强）growsoar iseskyrocket
表示减少的词汇（程度依次增强）dropfalldeclinedescend
动词修饰　gradually emarkablydramaticallyshaply
动词后介词to
from......to

3)cartoon
漫画的意图主要有三种讽刺（satirize)＼启发(inspire)娱乐（entertain)(一般不考）
social phenomenon--------negative or life philosophy
主要弄清楚漫画元素对应的象征意义（metaphor)比喻
他以漫画（圆型跑道上一个人，起点也是终点）为例子[FS:PAGE]
track比喻life ,runner比喻anyone,endless比喻success.比喻人生的一个成功接着要面临（new taskchallege)终点也是起点

推荐使用的句子结构
１）it structure(13的句子要用）形式主语（dummy subject)
i love you应该表达为
１．it is you who i love
2.when day breaks and night falls, i love you
3.if you love me .i love you
4.i love you because there is no bodyelse i can love
5.I loveyou so much that i can not live without you

2)it+系表＋that(to+v)
it is quite obvious for us that s+v
it goes without any question that
it is said that
it is pointed out by the authorities that
it is 状语　that s+v

3)倒装结构（inverted stucture)
s+v+0(adv)------only+ adv+ 助动词＋s+v+o
for example: i love you yesterday=only yesterday did i love you so much do i love you that i can not live without you

4)插入语(自由使用）
Ｉ，as it is, love you
as it is =to tell the truth=to be
frank=in a broad sense

5)so ....that...
the picture is so vivid that i can not help tempted to take another look
=so vivid is the picture that

6)as is well -known
as far as I am aware(据我所知道）

再看看前面那篇文章，真的很像曹门弟子的文章．　
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