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　 第一环节：提纲环节

　　 两面型 果因型 “How”型

　 开头段 提出双方观点 提出现象＋过渡句 提出问题＋过渡句

　　 自己观点的原因1 原因1 方法1

　　 自己观点的原因2 原因2 方法2

　　 自己观点的原因3 原因3 方法3

　　结论段 双方观点结论 现象前景结论 方法前景结论
第一步：写出开头段

　　模块1：两面型提出观点开头（转折法开头）

　　模板：It is widely accepted that ___________（主题）,_____________（名扩插入语，对这个主题进行一些修饰）, 谓语动词+扩展从句（有宾语可以使用定从，无宾语可以使用状从）However, others argue that___________（主题的近义词，避免与上一句重复）, more often than not （副词做插入语）, is harmful to the people _________

　　例如：工作压力是好事还是坏事？

　　It is widely accepted that pressure in work, forcefully imposed on the employees in this competitive world, can bring some positive results on the grounds that it can stimulate the staff immensely. However, others argue that stress, more often than not, is harmful to the people who cannot assume excessive pressure in their work.

　　模块2：果因型提出现象
　　Recently, one of the hottest (most controversial) topic/issue arousing general concern is that ___________（主题）,_____________（名扩插入语，对这个主题进行一些修饰），谓语＋宾语＋定从。In my opinion, there are several factors responsible for this (phenomenon, increase, situation, problem…….)

　　Recently, one of the hottest (most controversial) topic arousing general concern is that stress, more often that not, is harmful to the employees who cannot assume excessive pressure. It is no simply task to identify the negative effects of this phenomenon which involves several complicated factors./ In my opinion, there are several factors responsible for this problem.

　　模块3：

　　Nowadays, mounting attention has been turned to the___________（主题）, _____________（名扩插入语，对这个主题进行一些修饰Therefore it is high time that measures were taken to prevent this.

　　Nowadays, mounting attention has been turned to the high pressure in work, invariably brought to everyone in this competitive world. The immediate consequence is the damage of individual employee’s health. The longer-range result can be a decline in physic for the whole workforce since this problem has become more evident in each working unit. Therefore it is high time that measures were taken to prevent this.
第二步：中间段的提纲

　　模块4：两面型中间段提纲

　　 所要驳斥的观点的原因 所支持的原因（复杂）

　　中间段 原因1（简短） 原因1+例证

　　 原因2（简短） 原因2+强调句

　　 原因3（简短） 原因3
第三步：写出最后段

　　模块5：两面型结尾：

　　As the proverb says “No garden is without its weed”. ________ (形容词) to some extent as ___________is（as的倒装句）, I still advocate ______________(自己的观点).

　　例如：

　　Essential to some extent as work pressure is（as的倒装句）, I still advocate reducing it by efforts.

　　模块6：因果型结尾

　　From what has been discussed above, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that __________(主题)。We must call for an immediate action, because the current situation of (主题) _____________, permitted to continue, will surely lead to the end/destruction/damage of/to ______./或This situation/tendency will surely continue that it deserves more intensive research and public concern.

　　模块7：How型结尾

　　Following these suggestions may not guarantee the success/solution, but the pay-off might be worth the effort. It will help/benefit/contribute to_____________(效果) eventually.
第三环节：写作环节

　　模块8：中间第2段

　　But according to me, I firmly hold that its negative effect overweighs its benefits for the following reasons或work strain is more devastating than beneficial. First, too much pressure can damage employee’s health.（简单句） It is the decline in health that in return produces a negative effect on the work.（强调句） For example, due to the high pressure in work, a prominent journalist died on his way to interview a scholar, which is a tragedy and loss of the whole country （例证句）.

　　模块9：中间第3段

　　Besides, the enthusiasm of the staff can be quenched if they are exposed to overwhelming stress. Virtually, only by the love of one’s career, rather than the external pressure, can the employee be driven to accomplish the tasks in work as quickly and as well as possible. (倒装句)

　　模块10：中间第4段

　　Finally, a strained mind of the employee may reduce their efficiency in work, the most important factor to improve the output for each working unit.(n1,+ n2+名扩)
第四部分 例文

　　　例文1．安乐死问题：

　　　It is admitted that the practice of assisted suicide or euthanasia, a controversial issue in medical area, is to some extent positive on the grounds that it can help some dying patients to die painlessly under their requests. However, others argue that this kind of performance is inhumane for it may mercilessly deprive humans of their rights to live.

　　The principal argument advanced by those advocators is that euthanasia, more often than not, can soothe the unbearable pain of the patients, ease the heavy financial burden of their family, and save the limited public resources, such as the hospital facilities, for those possible to recover from serious diseases.

 But according to me, the permission of euthanasia is more cruel than considerate. The immediate reason to prohibit it is that in many cases, a patient’s right to die has subtly become a duty to die. It is the pressure from the exhausted and impatient relatives that push them make the decision. For example, a woman, whose relatives gathered for her planned euthanasia from overseas, had last-minute doubts. But the family said, “You can’t let our relatives come all this way for nothing”. Instead of ensuring that the patient’s true wishes were observed, the doctor carried out euthanasia. Besides, vicious crimes often come with this kind of mercy killing. Not only can greedy relatives of the patients hasten their death as quickly as possible through euthanasia, but also some impatient doctors who intend to withdraw the treatment may perform it without the requests. Finally, assisted suicide or euthanasia, an easy but prompt way to end human life, may throw away the patient’s opportunities to wait for the near future when the doctors may possibly come up with a new treatment, the treatment effective to terminal illness at the moment.
Humane to some degree as euthanasia is, any country cannot afford to permit its practice. If those appro